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The most overlooked way to increase your conversions... FINALLY, someone's talking about it

MikemorganHere's the skinny: A Great Offer will boost your sales more than anything else.

But what is a great offer?

Ah, that's the question few can answer.

"Million Dollar" Mike Morgan can... and he's agreed to appear on a free teleseminar with me Wednesday, July 25, 2008.

To sign up for the teleseminar, visit: http://www.davidgarfinkel.com/learn-offers.

To read my article about Mike, offers, the teleseminar, and the secret behind my three-page sales letter that created $40 million in sales for a six-person business, visit: http://www.world-copywriting-institute.com/morgan-teleseminar .

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

Three proven ways to get your business moving faster, right away

Rscover The smartest people I know these days aren't debating whether or not we're in a recession -- they're taking action to counter the effects of a slowed economy on their business.

I recently contributed a chapter to Scott Aughtmon's excellent book How Your Business Can Survive and Prosper in a Recession.  Here are three of my tips -- they're basic, and they work!

1. Get back in touch with old customers.  You probably never thought of how much it cost you -- in cash, time, energy, and other expenditures -- to get your old customers in the first place.  Don't feel bad; most business people don't think about that, either.  But it's probably more than you would estimate.  Many of those customers would buy from you again if you simply asked them.  Extend an attractive offer and continue the relationship!

2. Make an extra effort to keep your current customers.  Your competitors may be reaching out to steal your business.  Hold on to what you've got.  Go the extra mile with your current customers to keep them with you.

3. Offer prospective new customers a free sample.  It's an idea as old as business itself.  Does it work today?  Yes.  Eban Pagan has built an eight-figure (about $20 million a year) 21st-century Internet business with this strategy -- he starts out new customers by giving them valuable free content.  Anyone in just about any business can find a way to make this idea work.  Customers like it because it takes the burden of risk off of them.

In Scott's new book, I give seven more simple tips you can put to work for you right away.

Check out Scott's Web site at www.davidgarfinkel.com/recession-solutions for information about his book.  He's gathered hard-core money-making advice from experts including Jay Conrad Levinson, Ted Nicholas, John Carlton, Laura Ries, Marlon Sanders, Yanik Silver and many others.

And I'm sure you wouldn't be surprised that you can get a free sample of what's in the book -- a six-page guide to getting more customers fast for your business -- on Scott's site.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

John Reese 2.0: The Internet's first million-dollar-day marketer meets social networking and rich media

ReeseontvIf you are in Internet marketing, you've probably heard of John Reese.  He made business history four years ago with his product Traffic Secrets.  The sales letter, written by my friend copywriter extraordinaire Michel Fortin, brought in over $1 million in sales in 24 hours.  It was a first.

Well, Mr. Reese has not been asleep in the last four years.  I think he's probably always been ahead of the curve.  He's just launched a new promotion for his updated course Traffic Secrets 2.0.

See, the real players in Internet marketing agree you need to master two basic skills to do well:

1. writing effective sales copy

2. generating targeted traffic

So, if for no reason than to see what he's up to, let me suggest you check out John's video:

http://www.davidgarfinkel.com/secrets2.0

Come for the intrigue... and stay for the learning.  John teaches stuff that other people have used repeatedly to make money.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

My mouth is sewn shut, but I can tell you this much...

Gift_from_david_million_dollar_mikeA number of people today asked me about the secret alliance between me, super-copywriter Million Dollar Mike Morgan, and Traffic Geyser co-creator Frank Sousa.

Hey, I'm sworn to secrecy on this project.  So I can't say much.  But, I can confirm:

a) that it's true -- we are doing something together (but I can't say what as of yet; why in a sec)

b) that it will look like a HUGE GIFT to many people who market products, services, and info-products, once it comes to fruition, which will be fairly soon

c) that it is going to offer a quantum improvement in a particular aspect of marketing, and even an eight-year-old could guess what it is.

I learned a long time ago to keep my mouth shut when partners have agreed to keep something as "secret."

But as a former (and historically, as a) journalist, I promise you that the moment the "gag order" is lifted, I will be out WAY before Messrs. Morgan and Sousa can even put fingers to keyboard to bring you the news of what it's all about.

Fair enough?

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsleter

Just Say 'No' - One of Ryan Healy's extremely valuable tips for freelance copywriters

How_copywriters_can_get_respect_2Top freelance copywriters Ryan Healy and John "Angel" Angelache noticed that a lot of other copywriters are having the "Rodney Dangerfield problem" -- namely, they don't get no respect from their prospects and clients.

It's a real problem.  Fortunately, there are real solutions.

Ryan and John polled a group of copywriters and found these were among the top questions:

= How do you get around having to educate clients on the value of copywriting?

= How do you convince clients your copy will work?

= How do you get paid better as a copywriter?

= How do you stand out in a crowded market?

= How do you find clients ready to pay you $2,000 - $5,000 for a direct response sales letter?

Fortunately, Ryan and John have lived through these questions long enough to find workable, practical, profitable answers.  And they are kind and generous enough to answer these questions with specifics.  They share what they have found on a free 23-minute online video.

If you watch the video, then the next time someone makes a ridiculous, humiliating request of you, you'll not only have the presence of mind to calmly say "No"... you'll also have some valuable and easy-to-follow alternatives to replace that unfortunate specimen of sub-humanity with a worthwhile client who will treat you right and pay you well.

The video's at www.davidgarfinkel.com/copycode

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

Note: Ryan and John are not minor-leaguers.  For example, John has written for the late Gary Halbert, as well as for Michel Fortin, Joe Vitale, Yanik Silver and for me.  John's great and he knows what he's doing.  And, just in case you're wondering, we are the kind of clients he likes to have. 

An Appreciation for Tim Russert - and what his legacy means for copywriters and other marketers

Tim_russert_4The man who hired him to go on-camera revealed in USA Today last week that Tim Russert repeatedly refused because, he said, he was ugly. Finally he gave in and said yes. He didn't change the way he looked.

But if the camera didn't love him, the people sure did. I'd like to talk to you today about why Tim Russert engendered such affection from such a large swath of the population, and see if there might be a lesson or two for us in the marketing business.

Before I continue, let's be clear: Despite what you may have seen on TV, not everyone loved Tim Russert. There are those on the right who believe, and have stated loudly in recent days, that Russert carried a leftward media bias and attempted to shield it under the premise of journalistic impartiality. I can see some validity to their point of view. I want to acknowledge it and dispense with it, because it's not what I want to talk about here.

The thing about Mr. Russert I do want to talk about was his personal commitment to the truth -- as he saw it -- and the difference that made in the way people responded to him and felt about him.

When Mr. Russert died of a heart attack working in the NBC studios in Washington last Friday, you could almost say than an era ended. He was a law-school graduate and for the Sunday morning news show Meet the Press, which he hosted, he would prepare just as a winning prosecutor would prepare for a case. Week after week, Mr. Russert would spend hours digging through files, news clips, interviews, speech transcripts, and probably whatever else he could get his hands on to be over-prepared for one hour on television that about four million people were said to watch.

No one else reporting or analyzing news on TV could measure up. Not even close.

Tim Russert was tough as nails when he found contradictions between what a politician had said at one time and what the politician had said at another. But unlike some of his more insecure and intellectually lazy media counterparts (on the left, in the mainstream, and on the right alike), Mr. Russert was always civil, and yes, you could say, respectful in tone.

And off-camera, in his career as a reporter and Washington bureau chief for NBC, it was said he was both a fierce competitor and a career benefactor. He helped rookies get into the swing of things. He helped his NBC colleagues do a better job. Some brave politicians, like Connecticut Senator Joe Lieberman, even said that Mr. Russert made them better politicians because of his tough and uncompromising standards in the interviews he conducted.

As someone who grew up in the Washington suburbs and worked in rough-and-tumble journalism in D.C. and New York, I can tell you it's no bed of roses and there are probably some aspects of Mr. Russert that aren't quite so laudable, that we'll never hear about. No matter. I'm pretty sure that, just like the media publicity machine has been proclaiming since his death last Friday, Tim Russert really was one of the good guys.

I think that came through, over the airwaves and through the cable boxes. There was an essential optimism and generosity to the man, and people could sense that. He was the quintessence of goofiness with his sports mania, and the diametric opposite of cool and hip in his personal style, but you could just tell, he was a regular guy. He cared and he did what he thought was right. Just about all of the time, it seemed.

Now how this applies to marketers and marketing is in two ways. The first one you're sort of stuck with. If you happen to be a caring and generous person, that will work in your favor. If you're not, well, what can I say? Nobody's perfect, after all. This is a big world and there's room for all of us to succeed on our own merits. You've got to play your best cards, whatever they are.

But there's one thing about Mr. Russert that anyone can use to their advantage -- it they're willing to work for it. Mr. Russert did his homework. Not occasionally. Not half-heartedly. He did it 100%, 100% of the time.

(Now you could say that he did too much, too often, and that was part of what led to his death by heart attack at age 58. But if he had spent less time working and more time taking care of his health, he might have lasted a lot longer AND he still could have given 100%, 100% of the time during the hypothetical fewer hours he was working.)

With my private mentoring clients, I repeatedly point out the truth sells better than a bunch of persuasive-sounding concoctions -- but you have to work harder to sell with the truth. You have to really do your homework and put all of your effort into the copy you are writing.

If you have ever had the privilege of hearing John Carlton describe how he creates a sales letter, you will instantly know what I mean. John's copy is very emotionally evocative, but it is based on facts, which come from research. Hard, methodical, detective-like research.

He takes his time and he doesn't cut corners.

And the copy makes millions.

A couple of other top, top, top A-list copywriters who have registered their names as trademarks, so I won't risk trademark infringement by naming them here, do exactly the same thing. Dig, dig, dig.

In case you're curious, this same work-habit, and its same highly profitable effects, have held true over time.

In fact, many years ago, the piano ad that caused a six-year backlog in orders for a piano manufacturer was the result of poring over the facts and searching for that one gem that would cause the dam to break (the dam of customer demand). I wrote about that in the first issue of the World Copywriting Newsletter. (If you haven't subscribed yet, you can now by clicking here.)

So that is the lesson. Most people think advertising is filled lies and half-truths. And -- let's be blunt -- a lot of it is. Even some of the most successful ads are, but, eventually, the people behind them get penalized, sometimes fined, and sometimes put in jail.

Selling with the truth is not easy. But it is possible. The most successful sales letter I ever wrote, which grossed $40 million for a six-person company, was based on a handful of facts I dug out of hours and hours and hours of research about the company.

Note: The company wasn't lying in its advertising before, but it wasn't including any of the facts I found either. And its previous advertising was delivering a big fat zero in results.

So, to sum up: Tim Russert may have had, as they say in the trade, "a face made for radio," but his devotion to the truth, as he saw it, was legendary -- and beautiful. And that devotion was the major contributing factor to his being the most influential and revered journalist of his generation.

Could your work-habits and approach to marketing benefit from that revelation?

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Blog

The brick wall every copywriter runs into eventually....

Client_from_hell_2If you become a skilled copywriter, sooner or later, you're going to run into a situation like one of my mentoring clients did recently.

The publisher of an info-product on making money in a niche market hired a copywriter. The publisher was very good at making money in his market, but had never sold information over the Web.  He was brand new to info-marketing.

The copywriter, my mentoring client, worked closely with him for three weeks.  Long nights, rewrites, poured his heart and soul into the copy.  Blood, sweat, and tears. He truly gave it everything he had.

Come launch day, the publisher looked at it and condescendingly scolded the copywriter.  "I thought you were really going to work on the copy," he said.  "It looks to me like you wrote this in your spare time.  I can see I wasted my money with you."

The copywriter was outraged, and told the client he was mistaken.

The client wrote his own sales letter.  One thouand two hundred fifty seven visitors to his site, and three sales.  Less than 1/4 percent conversion.

In a panic, the client called the copywriter and asked what he should do.

"You're not going to like what I'm about to tell you," the copywriter said, holding his tongue and not saying what was really on his mind.

"Say it anyway," spat out the client.

"Run the copy I gave you," the copywriter said, and politely hung up the phone.

The copy was already paid for, so, in desperation, the client did what he knew wouldn't work.  He ran the copywriter's copy, as submitted.  He didn't have anything else to do.

So far, 11.3% response.  Roughly 37 times more than what the client was able to do on his own.

The copywriter is currently on a long Caribbean cruise, cooling his jets.  He told me this story just before he left.  Fortunately most of his other clients aren't as stubborn, and so far, he's had a very good year.

But he knows that once in a while, the Client From Hell shows up.

Rather than give you some hokey moral to this story which I would have to make up, I'm going to ask you:

  • If you're a copywriter, has this happened to you?  What did you do about it?  What do you do now to prevent it?
  • If you're a client, what's your side of the story?  I'll publish comments from people on both sides of this issue.  I'd really like to know.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

It walks! It talks! It makes people take out their credit cards and buy! It's...

Video_sales_letters_3 ... a video sales letter!

Video has gotten easier and easier to put up on the Web, and now Mike Stewart has (once again) come up with some great innovations to make posting video sales letters easier than ever before.

Mike agreed to be my guest Tuesday night on a Webcast which, fortunately, was preserved for posterity.  The Webcast was entitled "Video Sales Letter Secrets" and Mike explained how easy it is to sell with video... and, just as important, how easy it (now) is to get a video clip up on the Web.

The secret? WordPress blogs.  You can basically create an instant Web site using Mike's techniques.  And, with a FlipVideo digital video camera, you can create videos just about as easily as snapping your finger.

If you'd like to hear the whole story, go to: www.davidgarfinkel.com/videosaleslettersecrets

But, if you already get it and are saying, "Where is the software and where are the shortcuts?", Mike's put together a package that's remarkably inexpensive and can juice up your sales right away, at www.davidgarfinkel.com/salesvideo

Mike has been doing professional video since 1979 and he says that what you can get today for a few hundred dollars would have cost a quarter of a million back in the day.  I say, seize the moment!  Check it out.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

This fear-inducing headline from a (gasp) NEWSPAPER shows the unintended power of hidden phrases. DON'T let this happen in YOUR copy

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Just returning from three solid days of deep focus on just the right word (as a teacher at John Carlton's fabulous 3-day 17 Points of Copywriting workshop), I was astounded to see the above headline in this morning's San Francisco Chronicle.

The headline is bad enough -- but we all know that fear sells, and it certainly sells newspapers.  (Don't think I'm going to take it lightly though the next time I see or hear a journalist taking a swipe at an ad because it preys on people's fears.)

But that wasn't what astounded me.  I was more interested in the double meaning of the headline -- almost surely unintended.   Look:

Secret_prize_inside2 .

Secret_prize_inside3
Hey, I'm not playing word games here.  Long experience and study has forced me to conclude that's how people really read.  Neuro-linguistic programming concepts of embedded commands and nested loops are just two of the many indications I have that some people will unconsciously take headline meaning number three from reading headline number one.

One of the subtler arts of writing headlines (and body copy) is to see every which-way it could be read, including, of course, the ways you don't want it to be read.  Keep rewriting it until the meaning is unambiguous.  Clear and simple.  Straightforward.

Or, if your headline could mean two (or more) things, make sure both, or all) meanings work for you --  100%.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

How To Raise Lots of Money for Your Business Fast -- Not Only That, But Here's A Way Where "Investor" Isn't A Four-Letter Word

Avoid_venture_capital_mistakes I know a guy who has raised over $100 million for other companies and recently convinced a major Hollywood studio to do a licensing deal that could end up making Internet history.

Usually people like that don't bother to talk to entrepreneurs, inventors, copywriters... you know, the kind of people who (for the most part) are the people who read this blog.

They're just too busy working on their deals.

The guy I know is different.  His name is Greg Writer and he has a passion for getting money-making information out to the general public.  He used to host a talk-radio show on investing.  In fact, he knows a lot about investing.  At age 21 (over two decades ago) he opened up his own full-service stock brokerage firm.  He holds the record for being the youngest person in history to do so.

Greg agreed to let me interview him on Wednesday, and we recorded the call.  You can listen to this as a Webcast, or download it to from your computer, at www.davidgarfinkel.com/funding .

The title of the program is

How to Get Angel Investors on Favorable Terms...

Secrets Big Venture Capitalists Hope You NEVER Find Out!

One of the things he talked about is the common mistake business owners make that practically invites venture capitalists to rip the business owners off (legally, unfortunately).  This mistake can cost a successful entrepreneur hundreds of thousand or even millions of dollars later on down the line.

Yet it's easy to avoid this mistake -- if you know what to do to prevent it.  Greg revealed what to do.

If you're trying to raise cash for your business and you're frustrated, listen to the man who has helped raise over $100 million -- Greg Writer.  This was a very informative and valuable program!

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

P.S. By the way, I don't think getting an investor is always the best solution myself.  I've helped start multi-million-dollar businesses with a sales letter or Web site alone.  But there are many times when you need outside investors.  Growth through sales is not always the best way.

The problem is "vulture capitalists" -- investors who treat the business owner like dirt.  Greg will tell you how to steer clear of those types and get the kind of investor you'd like to have.

www.davidgarfinkel.com/funding

Believe me, doing this has more impact on your sales than traffic, technology, graphic design, or even using hot words in your copy

Copywriting_2_kinds_of_proof Famous advertising guru of yore, James Webb Young, said it many years ago: Every advertiser has the same problem, and that is to be believed.

What makes people believe you?

That's pretty well known: it's proof, of the benefits and/or solutions you are promising in your copy.

It's also well known that the better and stronger your proof, the more they believe you.

And the more they believe you, the more they buy.

Yesterday I was in session with one of my enormously successful mentoring clients. We were going over a new promotion he was planning. He had gathered an overwhelming amount of proof for his claims.

As we examined what he had come up with, I realized there are two kinds of proof, and they fortify each other almost exponentially when you use them together.

The first kind of proof is proof that you can deliver the results you are promising.

The second kind of proof is proof that you understand how you deliver your results well enough to explain it to ordinary people -- non-experts.

This is especially important when you are selling information or a service like instruction, coaching or business development.

For example, if you were a major league baseball team owner, you might hire baseball slugger Barry Bonds to play on your team (if the performance enhancement controversies didn't scare you).  Because he delivers results.  It's all there.  In the record books.

But who would you hire to help your other batters bat better?

Probably not Barry Bonds, but Barry Bonds' batting coach.

Barry delivers results; his coach can explain how to deliver those results and help others do the same.

In major-league baseball, it's pretty hard to be both people. 

In other fields, it can be easier.

Look at the world of male dating instruction.  The guys who, marketing-wise, have the most success, not only know how to attract desirable women ("Barry Bonds"). They also have courses that describe, in highly understandable and convincing detail, how to do what they do ("Barry Bonds' coach").

Or consider the world of financial advisors.  Many smart people hesitate to invest under the guidance of an advisor who's not a multimillionaire him- or herself.  But then, there's Warren Buffett, whose letters about investment philosophy and practice in Berkshire Hathaway annual reports are so beautifully written they make grown men cry ("Barry Bonds' coach"). And seeing as Forbes magazine ranks Buffett as the richest man in the world ("Barry Bonds"), you have to think he knows what he's doing when it comes to investing money.

(I put Buffett loosely in the category of financial advisor because he, in effect, offers to invest people's money for them by selling shares of Berkshire Hathaway, the public company he's chairman of.)

And for another example, look at the blog post just below this one, about search engine expert Nancy Andrews.  Not only does she very clearly explain advanced search engine tactics and strategies ("Barry Bonds' coach"), but she has also gotten #1 ranking on Google for her own company ("Barry Bonds").

So, to summarise:

Form of proof #1 shows that you can do it yourself.

Form of proof #2 shows that you can explain it to others, and maybe even teach it to them.

You wouldn't believe what a difference it makes in your marketing when you use both of these forms of proof together.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

Nancy Andrews Webinar... Free... On How to Get Search Rankings Using Techniques That Look A Lot Like Copywriting To Me...

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Last Monday, I interviewed "reluctant guru" Nancy Andrews, a very sharp search engine guru.

How sharp?

She and her husband are #1 on Google in their business, The Golf Collection, on for their chosen keywords, "golf gifts."

She's helped others increase their revenues up to 10 times, just by increasing their rankings in the search engines.

The Webcast lasted 90 minutes, and I just found out the webcast has been converted to a screen-capture Webinar so you can watch as well as listen to the recording.

She talks about things like

  • Sites you can link to, free and for modest fees, to increase your ranking.
  • The best article directories to use to hike up your position.
  • How to avoid getting "sanboxed" by Google
  • Crucial ratios of types of links Nancy swears nobody else talks about and she has
    never talked about anywhere before

and much, much, much more!

Before I give you the link, let me urge you to first seek out the top of the page and register for Nancy's "Early Bird" notification list:

Nancy_andrews_early_bird_list

Here's why.  Nancy has a coaching program that is routinely closed and/or sold out.  She's planning to open it soon.  You may or may not be interested, but it's practically guaranteed you'll be locked out if you're not on the list.  (Her program sells out FAST.)

Okay, okay... here's the link:

http://www.davidgarfinkel.com/google

Set aside an hour and a half and be prepared to take a LOT of notes.  Nancy really overdelivers!

David Garfinkel, Publisher
World Copywriting Newsletter

1. John Carlton 2. His "Interactive Brain Training" for Copywriters 3. Me... And 4. You?

17carltontiki_2A lot of people have asked me if I'm going to put on a live copywriting seminar this year.

The answer is no... not exactly.

I won't, but, I only have ONE live program where I'll be teaching.  I'll be assisting, not the main presenter.  The term we're using is "wingman."

My good friend John Carlton, who many people believe is the best living copywriter on the planet, is hosting a wacky, almost eccentric, event.

https://m190.infusionsoft.com/go/17pws/dgarfinkel/

John's talent and accomplishments almost defy description. The fact that he wrote one of the first infomercials and was the only person ever to be partner to the late Gary Halbert (at least as far as I know) are merely the tip of the iceberg.

Crusty old curmudgeon Dan Kennedy says Carlton is one of the few people he'd actually pay to be the room with.

I've learned so much whenever I've been in the room with John I know exactly why Kennedy says that.

Look, if you're interested in learning from the best, you need to check this out.  See if it's for you.

https://m190.infusionsoft.com/go/17pws/dgarfinkel/

Oh, here are just a few details:

1.  On May 2-4, (that's Friday through Sunday), in gorgeous San Francisco, John is hosting a very small workshop -- no more than 20 attendees will be allowed in -- where he will reveal the secret "17-point Checklist" of critical elements he puts into everything he writes. (This checklist is the foundation of his consistent, legendary success.)

2.  However, this is NOT a lecture.  It's a hands-on, highly interactive workshop... and John intends to force-feed real copywriting skills straight into your brain and your muscle-memory.  Under his direct personal attention, you will actually write during this one-of-a-kind event.

3.  And here's something even more unique:  He is letting you name your price to attend. It's a wacky pricing experiment that no one else has ever attempted before.

Check it out. Maybe I'll see you there?

https://m190.infusionsoft.com/go/17pws/dgarfinkel/

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

If You Have Ever Wondered Whether A Teleseminar Could Be Spoken-Word Sales Copy, You Need To Find Out More About Michael Cage

Michael_cage_undisputed_expert_teleThis weekend I spent three electrifying days at Michael Cage's small, intimate and cutting-edge powerful seminar on how to use teleseminars and webinars to make maximum marketing profits.

Michael is an old friend of mine and has really stayed under the radar as far as most of the people who would like to hear what he has to say are concerned.  Until now, that is.  He is emerging as, well, the "go-to guy" when it comes to money-making on-phone/online seminars.

I stole that label for Michael, by the way, from Bill Glazer (Dan Kennedy's partner), who said it first and was one of many big guns in the audience at the seminar. Other attendees who are forces in their own right included Steve and Bill Harrison (National Publicity Summit), voiceover maven Susan Berkley, and commercial real estate investment guru Sherman Ragland, to name a few.

I have been pleading with Michael since last summer to do a teleseminar for my subscribers, since the information he has is unique and can be turned into solid and legitimate cash very quickly for anyone who has a business, and even for many people who want to start one.

Here's a quick example: Michael's the only guy I've ever heard who insists that you have one or more "sales stories" at the ready for a presentation AND tells you exactly how to put one together.

He goes further:

"If you try to go into a competitive market with no sales story, you have no chance," Michael said this weekend.  "If you're not in a competitive market, it doesn't mean you don't have to do this. But if you're the only one in your market with a sales story, you will dominate your market."

To show us the power of this kind of story, Michael brought one of his clients, Kevin Thompson, to the front of the room.  Kevin had seasoned, hardened, cynical marketers who had heard it all before hanging on his every word as he described in lurid detail how he had almost lost his life as a commercial fisherman in Alaska... and then lost his wife (to divorce) when he decided to start a business of his own, rather than take another life-threatening blue-collar job.

In case you're wondering what's the point of all this, it's money.  Kevin reported to the group that he routinely brings in five figures in sales when he tells that personal sales story on a live teleseminar.

After hearing the story myself, I can understand why.

I spoke with Michael privately after the seminar, asking him to do a teleseminar (about teleseminars) for my subscribers.  He finally said yes.  That's one commitment down, two to go. 

I still need to get a specific date from him, and I'm going to give it everything I've got to convince him to talk more about sales stories on the call.

Being in Northern Virginia brought back fond and melancholy memories of my old friend Mac Ross, who used to live there.  He passed away two years ago.

Michael and I both recalled hearing Mac's "Four W's" formula for the little-discussed but vitally important NEGATIVE side of a prospect's self-talk as they are reading your sales copy.

Mac apparently only uttered the formula once in public, at the Jay Abraham seminar where he was speaking.  Michael and I both heard a recording of that seminar.  The Four W's are questions that you need to answer in order to get the grumpy side of most every prospect to actually take the action you want them to take.

Here are the questions, which your copy needs to answer, maybe not directly, but by providing content and reasons that allow the prospect to come up with the answers themselves (answers favorable to you) as they read your copy:

1. Why are you bothering me?

2. Who cares?

3. Why should I believe you?

4. Why should I do anything about it NOW?

Those may seem like innocuous or even overly aggressive questions... until, that is,  you've actually tried to make copy produce results in a competitive marketplace environment.

Once you've been through that harrowing experience, you realize why those who knew him recognized Mac as the understated, world-class genius he was.

David Garfinkel
World Copywriting Newsletter

In The Winter of this Year's U.S. Presidential Primary Campaign Comes an Important Lesson About Headlines... from the Newsstand, of all places

HeadlinetherewillbebloodI was at the grocery store today (Sunday) strolling past the magazine rack when these words jumped out at me:

There Will Be Blood
Why The Right Hates McCain

It was the cover headline for Newsweek magazine (which doesn't look like it's doing too well.  I say this as a former magazine editor myself.  This national magazine has 68 pages, including covers, and I counted 16 ad pages.  It should have a greater number of ad pages -- at least 23.  And it really should have more overall pages to be profitable. It looks like Newsweek's glory days may be buried in the past.)

A few interesting points here:

  • The words in the first headline are familiar, because they are the same as the title of a popular movie ("There Will Be Blood"), now playing in theaters
  • I found the headline intriguing enough (even though I've heard, seen and read versions the same story several times already in the last few weeks) to shell out $4.95 on a magazine I'm otherwise not all that interested in (with put-you-to-sleep-fast articles like "Chelsea Clinton Emerges on the Campaign Trail", "Will This One Be The Change Election?" and "How to Train a Husband," to name a few.)
  • The headline on the magazine's cover was so catchy that my cashier at the check-out stopped, smiled, picked up the magazine, read the headline out loud and laughed. Then she examined the images on the cover more closely, pointed at one picture, and blurted out, "Oh, look!  There's a bible-thumper!"

Now we could be snide and say something like, "If they put half as much thought, effort and creativity into what's INSIDE the magazine as what's ON THE COVER, maybe they'd have more than starving-to-death 68 total pages -- and a just-scraping-by 16 advertising pages."

But let's skip that part.  It's pretty rough these days putting out a print publication of any sort and making money.  Seasoned pro's spend thousands of hours a week trying to figure out how to keep Newsweek (print edition) afloat, so I'm not going to second-guess them.

What I do want to point out is that headlines from proven headline structures work. They cause people to pay attention (not just me, but the cashier ringing up the magazine). And of course they induce people to buy.  (With a milder, namby-pambier headline on Newsweek's cover, I might have left the magazine in the store.)

I have repeatedly said in my courses, like Breakthrough Copywriting, that the headline is the most, most, most important part of your copy.  In Breakthrough Copywriting, I included twenty proven money-making headline templates with over 200 actual specific adaptations of headlines for different industries.

The course has helped many people become profitable copywriters. 

But please don't think I'm claiming to be the first person to talk about the importance of headlines.  Not by a long shot.  Madison Avenue advertising pioneer David Ogilvy, in the 1960s, pointed out that "When you have written your headline, you have spent eighty cents out of your dollar."

Here's another important point -- if you're a major national publication, even a limping one like Newsweek, you can get away with using someone else's movie title for your headline. I don't know the specifics of the law on this one. But my suggestion would be never to copy a headline word-for-word.

Instead, adapt a familiar headline, title or other phrase by changing a few words.

If your new creation works (and I mean really works) as a headline, you have saved hours upon hours of time (not to mention blood, sweat and tears) and you can expect highly profitable results from the advertising that follows.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

Introducing "Mr. Moneyfingers"... and the Free Anti-Recession Online Seminar

Recession_just_say_no_3 Mr. Moneyfingers" is the nickname given by a client to Chris Haddad, one of the outstanding copywriters I'm mentoring.

Chris joined me Thursday for a conversation you can listen to on the Web. We talked about how to set up a detour for the Recession, which was planning to come to your town (and your business) any day now.

Our online seminar, officially titled "Profit During The Recession," is posted for your review (free) at http://instantTeleseminar.com/?eventid=1857711 .

We got great response from listeners.  A few unsolicited raves:

  • "Your call was just incredible."
  • "Great Stuff! Worth the wait."
  • "Phenomenally helpful call - rich information - enlightening - can use immediately."

Chirs and I revealed four things you can do to stave off recession and keep the profits flowing no matter what the (economic) weather.  I've used these very techniques to double and triple revenues, and even to add millions to the sales of several businesses.

Oh, by the way...  once again, the webcast is free.  And we aren't selling anything during the program, either.

And just for the record, Chris is no slouch when it comes to marketing.  Here's my favorite story about him: He wrote a sales letter for famous info-marketer Jeff Paul.  Jeff used the letter as a script outline for a teleseminar and made $96,000 just on that phone call.  (Jeff made a lot more when he used Chris's letter... as a sales letter.)

But we didn't talk about involved copywriting or teleseminar sales techniques on the program Thursday.  We stayed with proven, simple things you can do, now, to profit and enjoy your business.  Join us online for the webcast.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

P.S.  Here's the link to a Press Release about the event:

http://www.free-press-release.com/news/200802/1202168488.html

Copywriters, Take Note: Best Picket Sign Yet From The Hollywood Writers' Strike

Hollywood_writers_strikeSan Francisco Chronicle's Leah Garchik reports today one of her readers spotted the following picket sign from a member of the Writers Guild of America (movie & TV writers on strike) in San Francisco's Union Square over the weekend:

"Without us, there's just reality."

Call it: San Francisco mindwarp meets pleading Hollywood screenwriter.

But at this holiday time of the year, it's time for every results-producing copywriter to take a moment and appreciate ourselves. For it is we who create extremely pleasant new realities for our clients.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

Writing of a Different Stripe: My Maiden Voyage as a Columnist

Column_2Ever get in touch with an old friend after many years of having no idea where that person was or what they were doing?

That's what happened to me a few weeks ago.

I ran across my old boss, mentor and friend Mike Johnson on the Web. In the early 80s, Mike shepherded my career for six years, recommending me into a job on a New York-based McGraw-Hill Magazine, Housing

A year and a half later, he hired me out of the job and into the company's World News bureau in Chicago.  Later on, after he left World News and moved to England to edit International Management magazine, and after I had moved to San Francisco and left McGraw-Hill, he hired me as a freelancer for his magazine.

Then we lost touch for about 20 years.

A few weeks ago, I happend to find something Mike had written recently. I re-established contact.

It turns out Mike now writes some uniquely fascinating columns for a site called The Columnists. After a few emails back and forth, and a look at what I had written over the years (including, most notably, what's on this very blog), he invited me to try my hand at a column myself.

My first one is up and running, as of this morning.  It's called: "The Love Child of Welfare and Entrepreneurism." 

Is it Diana Ross meets FDR meets Donald Trump

See what you think:

http://www.thecolumnists.com/guestcols/garfinkel1.html

It's nice to be writing a little general-interest, mass-media type stuff again.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

In Case You Were Wondering What Your Advertising Is Supposed to Do (or in case you forgot), Here It Is In One Tidy Little Package:

BrandThe chart you're looking at shows how branding works when it works best. It does not represent the be-all and end-all of what your advertising is supposed to do, but it does show how your customer would relate to your brand name when your marketing has worked as it should:

1. The customer recognizes your brand.

2. The customer becomes aware of your brand.

3. The customer remembers your brand.

4. Your customer prefers your brand.

But here's a quick quiz for you:

Does "prefer" mean the exact same thing as "buy?"

BZZZT!

Time's up.

No, Johnny, that's right! "Prefer" does not mean the same thing as "buy!"

Here, actually, is exactly what your advertising is supposed to do:

"1. acquire new customers

"2. lock them into a buying cycle - each repeat purchase is then free from the crippling initial cost of acquiring a customer."

Rapid_response_advertisingThis all from Geoff Ayling's excellent but out-of-print book Rapid Response Advertising. He points out that when your advertising is working right, over the course of time customers become aware of your offering and get to stage four, brand preference.

But meanwhile, every step the way, and continuing once you reach brand nirvana and everyone knows your name and wants what you got (stage 4), your ads need to do 1. and 2., above.

Side note: I was fortunate to find out about this book in 1999 and buy it while it was still easily available in the U.S. (Ayling is from Australia, and that's where the book was published.)

On Amazon.com, I found a few copies available at much higher prices than what I paid.  If you are serious about improving advertising effectiveness, consider making the investment.  It's worth it.

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

Licensing: Completely New Way to Generate Wealth (for most marketers)

License_marketing_for_big_bucksjpgFor a long time, I have looked at copywriters and other creative marketers in the same light as inventors.

One thing that has always bothered me is: Since inventors can license their inventions to big companies and get ongoing royalties, why can't copywriters?

Well, of course they can. But until very recently I hadn't heard of a reliable way of doing so that would work for most copywriters.

That all changed when I got an email the other day from my friend and teacher Bob Serling.  Bob has developed some terrific licensing ideas that he has used himself for marketing materials -- and he has mentored others to use these ideas as well.

I invited Bob to present a teleseminar with me, and he accepted. It was very content-rich and included quite a bit of information about Bob's techniques, and how and why most marketers can use them.

We also dealt with the painful and delicate question of why so many marketers fail when they try to license materials, and how to avoid these problems.

We recorded the teleseminar.  You can listen to it or download it, free of charge, at http://www.davidgarfinkel.com/licensing-teleseminar

David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter

By the way, Bob has also put together a series of video interviews on licensing with mega-marketer Mike Long (the man behind the $14 million Stompernet launch.)  If you'd like to see the videos, they are also available at no cost from http://www.davidgarfinkel.com/video