(actual fortune-cookie fortune I received on Sunday night)
A recent flurry of activity followed by four days of fatigue/nigh paralysis got me thinking about a lot of things, and when I got this fortune (above) after a hearty plate of combination chow mein, my thoughts turned to what I had learned this week from Michel Fortin, Joe Vitale, and indirectly from Clayton Makepeace.
Michel and I have been doing a lot of teleseminars together lately. One thing he keeps hammering home is that the copy you write needs to be in your own voice -- not a pale-imitation, carbon-copy version of someone else's.
Joe asked me to review the manuscript of a new book he's coming out with, and in his own way, he makes the same point, rather emphatically.
And a friend of mine who attended Clayton's seminar this weekend was telling me that Clayton showed how he uses a lot of religious imagery (metaphor) in his copy -- which comes in part at least from a very strong religious background (through, my friend reported, Clayton says he's not that religious now).
What all three great copywriters are harping on is that you've got to bring you - the real you, the unvarnished you, the unique and peculiar you, the unconventional you - to the party when you start to write copy. And that's when the magic will happen.
But, there's a catch. (There always is, now, isn't there?)
And that's that you have to know the difference between "advertisement" and "soapbox."
For there's a difference, and an important one, between being your unique, unconventional, quirky self, and using an advertising medium as a canvas to express your deepest creative and opinionated needs.
I've seen far too many people get drunk on their success with direct response copywriting, only to fall into the pit of ego-gratifying chest-beating, thinking that suddenly human nature has changed and people are really going to spend money because they have something to say.
How do you avoid falling into the pit yourself?
If I knew, I somehow think my life would be different than it is now. Because people from far and wide, people with money and power, great deals of it, thousands of these people, would either be
- lining up to seek my counsel, or
- trying to chase me off the face of the Earth.
And while I don't have the complete and irrefutable answer, this I can tell you with certainty, as a start.
Make sure whatever expression you are making, that is truly 'you,' stands up to the test by getting yes answers to these two questions (the first, originally heard from Dan Kennedy, the second, I gladly confess, from yours truly):
1. Does it advance the sale?
2. Is the copy more about the customer than it is about you?
David Garfinkel
Publisher, World Copywriting Newsletter