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James Van Wyck

Here's the sentence that electrified me .....

"Here's a quick example: Michael's the only guy I've ever heard who insists that you have one or more "sales stories" at the ready for a presentation AND tells you exactly how to put one together....."

Stories!

Human brains are wired to love stories.

Stories fascinate and intrigue.

We all let down our "cynical guard' when we hear a story.

We ALL create meaning from stories.

Human brains are wired to LEARN from stories.

Human brains are wired to TAKE ACTION (indirectly) as a result of stories.

Thanks for the GREAT reminder David!

Jim VanStoryteller!

PS, I am 100% down for Gage's teleseminar..... lemme know whre 'n when, I'll be the first to sign up.

michael webster

Stories are the bane of our existence.

Instead of thinking, we use our "stories" to "explain" where we have already moved to.

Bah, humbug!

Daegan Smith

David,

I just picked up your breakthrough copy course. Great stuff. Also it's funny you bring up Kevin he and are doing a call tomorrow night, so it's nice to know he had the room captivated and he had some live practice this weekend.

To the top,

Daegan

Daegan Smith

David,

I just picked up your breakthrough copy course. Great stuff. Also it's funny you bring up Kevin he and I are doing a call tomorrow night, so it's nice to know he had the room captivated and he had some live practice this weekend.

To the top,

Daegan

Kevin Francis

David,

Echo all Jim's comments, particularly about the power of stories. I still remember one of the stories he told at "Breakthrough Copywriting" (the one about his weird trip to China years ago!).

Re Mac Ross, well I never had the good fortune to see him in person but I do have that recording of the Jay Abraham seminar you mention. I remember thinking when I first heard Mac, this guy is incredible.

Concerning those 4 questions, I believe Mac referred to an old McGraw Hill ad to illustrate his point. There's a picture of a grumpy looking business guy and the copy goes...

"I don't know who you are.
I don't know your company.
I don't know your company's product.
I don't know what your company stands for.
I don't know your company's customers.
I don't know your company's record.
I don't know your company's reputation.
Now - what was it you wanted to sell me?"

(The tagline for the ad was "MORAL: Sales start before your salesman calls - with business publication advertising.)

We'll leave aside the question of the effectiveness of "Business publication advertising" but the point is pretty clear, I think.

BTW the ad is in "Ogilvy On Advertising".

Look forward to the Michael Cage call.

Devon White

I was at the workshop David's talking about with Michael and will firmly attest to the value Mike brings.

You can sell the cold hard facts all day but without the emotional charge that a story brings you're going to miss a lot of your audience.

When you take the facts and tell them INSIDE of a powerful and riveting story you've got something that entertains as it sells. It also stimulates the whole brain rather than just the left hemisphere and makes people much more ready to buy.

And if anyone can structure a teleseminar story so that it sells - it's Mike.

Carolyn Permentier

Hello,

As a copywriter, I know that everyone luvs a good story!

It really does break down barriers, doesn't it? It allows everyone to see you as a real, living, breathing human being ...

just like them.

And, when you boil it all away, that really IS the truth, methinks:

We're all the same. We think, we reason and we feel. So, appealing to the commonalities we all share is the way to 'touch' people in a very human way.

And, also as a CW, I totally concur with the 4 questions our copy MUST answer! :)

Good stuff.

Carolyn

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